And as far as your fics go, I pick....As They Were (Part 1).
And before I "change" anything, I need to gush really quickly: Peter & Edmund & WWII war tactics is possibly one of my favorite things ever (along with Mrs. P wondering about her kids' changes and Pete & Ed doing fencing in England and stuff). SO YAY.
But...what I would change would be...hmmm, I would want Mr. P to acknowledge his subconscious.
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And as far as your fics go, I pick....As They Were (Part 1).
And before I "change" anything, I need to gush really quickly: Peter & Edmund & WWII war tactics is possibly one of my favorite things ever (along with Mrs. P wondering about her kids' changes and Pete & Ed doing fencing in England and stuff). SO YAY.
But...what I would change would be...hmmm, I would want Mr. P to acknowledge his subconscious.