you can mean to slip not fall not mean to fall and slip
I love the paradox created by it, because the words are NOT the same. And, just, GAH. I love the contrast. :)
And the echo of the title throughout the poem, along with the singing mercy echo.
This is just so beautiful and I feel like it's meta in poetry form (which is doubly awesome, because meta alone is awesome), so yeah, this is AWESOME. ♥
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branchandroot
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Date: 2009-09-03 02:07 am (UTC)I love this poem!
and mean the same thing every time
you can mean to slip
not fall
not mean to fall
and slip
I love the paradox created by it, because the words are NOT the same. And, just, GAH. I love the contrast. :)
And the echo of the title throughout the poem, along with the singing mercy echo.
This is just so beautiful and I feel like it's meta in poetry form (which is doubly awesome, because meta alone is awesome), so yeah, this is AWESOME. ♥