I liked this! I really like how you divided up the first two sections, with the first one in the present and the second one with the future and the resistance fighters there (and how you used Terissa in the first and Lauren in the second <3). I also liked how very *ensembley* this is; like the show, it's sort of about John and the war, but really it's about everyone and what they're fighting for too.
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branchandroot
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Date: 2010-10-28 11:25 pm (UTC)Jesse/Lauren
My mind is a little blown.