The blackmarkety vibe totally came through, yes! And even if Susan is hung up on morals Lucy knows that chocolate surpasses morality, lol.
unintended profundity is also very cool :D you are definitely delivering the ouch but without your characters being ouch. they are wonderful, and real without being gritty. which is appropriate for Pevensies!
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Date: 2009-08-28 10:51 pm (UTC)unintended profundity is also very cool :D you are definitely delivering the ouch but without your characters being ouch. they are wonderful, and real without being gritty. which is appropriate for Pevensies!
d'aw, YOU are fab <3