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Sep. 12th, 2009 09:06 pm![[personal profile]](https://www.dreamwidth.org/img/silk/identity/user.png){kind=small}
be_themoonOh! I've been meaning to drop this meme on y'all for a while! Ganked from approximately half my writing f-list. O.o
Give me the title of a story I've never written, and feedback telling me what you liked best about it, and I will tell you any of: the first sentence, the last sentence, the thing that made me want to write it, the biggest problem I had while writing it, why it almost never got posted, the scene that hit the cutting room floor but that I wish I'd been able to salvage, or something else that I want readers to know.
You guys know my fandoms! If I don't know it, I'll make something up.
Give me the title of a story I've never written, and feedback telling me what you liked best about it, and I will tell you any of: the first sentence, the last sentence, the thing that made me want to write it, the biggest problem I had while writing it, why it almost never got posted, the scene that hit the cutting room floor but that I wish I'd been able to salvage, or something else that I want readers to know.
You guys know my fandoms! If I don't know it, I'll make something up.
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Date: 2009-09-16 02:20 am (UTC)no subject
Date: 2009-09-16 03:21 am (UTC)[Camera focuses on an extreme close-up of Susan's cheek, and zooms out to reveal her bent over a desk writing on a scroll.]
Lucy's voice: This is Susan, the other queen. She likes roses, and peace treaties, and a certain prince from Galma--
Susan: [Looks up.] Lu! What have I told you about disturbing people with the camera!
[Camera goes into zigzagging blurs of the corridors, Lucy's running feet occasionally appearing onscreen.]
Lucy's voice, a bit breathless: She's only pretending to dislike cameras!
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Date: 2009-09-16 03:40 am (UTC)Lucy's voice: And there are Peter and Edmund doing...knightly things. [Camera zoom in some] Damn, it doesn't zoom in more!
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Date: 2009-09-16 07:21 pm (UTC)Mr. Tumnus: Your majesty, you have paperwork to do -
[camera shuts off]
[comes back on]
Edmund: *unintelligible muttering* damn, how do you work this? how does Lucy do it?
Peter: Ed, this is a family dinner, not a political opportunity!
[camera focuses on Peter as he scowls.]
Edmund: Did I say anything about political opportunities? Why do you always assume the worst of me?
[Peter rolls his eyes and stabs his meat.]
Lucy: Tape Susan, tape Susan -
[camera swings towards Susan]
Lucy: she's got her elbows on the table!
Susan: I am confiscating that tape later!
Edmund: Only if you can find it!
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Date: 2009-09-16 11:43 pm (UTC)Lucy: *yawn* Good morning! Oh, [camera pans up and zooms out] This is my room! Let's go spy on Susan and see if she's still asleep.
[camera focuses on Lucy's bare feet]
Lucy: *sing-song* SUSAN!